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I promise to live this year
Not only sit around in fear
What could have happened, what id I had fun?
I won't ask these questions, not on a long run.
I promise to feel this year;
Give everything at least one shot and hear
What is music of the days and nights
I won't get into - with my self - irrelevant fights
I promise to get back into every little things
I've missed to much, so I'll feel free I won't say
I'll sing and dance and laugh and enjoy;
My life will become my fullness and wicked toy!
- január 18 2013 14:37:14
First of all: there has been a great piece of bravery to compose a poem in (any) foreign language. Secondly: wish all your promises come true in this new 2013 year. Thirdly: I have found some places that possibly might need correction, such as:
"what id (if) I had fun?"
"every little things (thing)"
"missed to (too) much)"
And, just a guess: I think if you write "enjoy" you have to specify what, e.g. "enjoy it"
Nevertheless, congratulate and big respect!
- január 18 2013 19:54:22
A fogadalmakat év végén számon fogjuk kérni. Kívánom hogy úgy legyen amint azt elképzelted. Legyen boldog, gondtalan és vidám számodra az új év!
- január 25 2013 13:21:37
Dear Ross, I was in a hurry to put this out so yes I've made mistakes. Though I have to tell U the last comment of yours is not right grammatically. Enjoy. Not enjoy it, cause if you could see after the "I'll" whatever I want to put and I mean together comes as V1. The rest of my mistakes I think quite little and I think ur lesson is irrelevant. Thanks though
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