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I want to see You,
But You don't want to see me...
I think You are the One,
But You think it's to late...
You are in my dreams, Because I'm in love with You.
But what is the truth,
I don't know.
I'm so sad because of your words,
I want to cry, when I'm thinking about You.
Because You are the One, the Only One,
Who can I love all my life.
Please give me one moment,
One moment of Your life,
And I will show You, what means the real love...
Please give me one minute, to say You some important things,
And please answer to my questions...
Just one minute please,
This means the air to me,
Because I can't live without air...
And this is what You means to me,
You are the air, the water, the field,
You are the Only One, who can make me happy...
I love You, my Baby!!!
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- április 25 2008 12:45:14
Very nice love-poem. . This five sentences the favorites.
"This means the air to me,
Because I can't live without air...
And this is what You means to me,
You are the air, the water, the field,
You are the Only One, who can make me happy"
Congratulations! zsuzsu |
- április 25 2008 14:19:21
Dear Mmelcsi,
I cannot live without air, also. Like you!
Your poet is very good. It was very nice for me!
You are the only one who write the poets in English language, are't you? I think so.
With love: Susanne Torma |
- április 26 2008 11:09:22
Susanne, I don't know it but thank you very much |
- április 26 2008 16:38:15
A can only say what i have already said: I really don't want to hurt you but I think you should show your poems to an English teacher before you post them. But i like the idea and the theme of this poem anyway. |
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